谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my

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谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my
谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to become a painter.那个who is lovely.
黄金_shaka和 fhjyming帮忙解释下从句
还有：
My good friend
His name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.

谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my
There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.最后一个me改成I.
I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.语法没错,但是没必要用从句,
可以改成I like playing with my lovely younger brother.
或者I like playing with my younger brother,who is very lovely.

I like playing with my lovely younger brother.比较好
你通篇都是口语化文字，那么这里的从句实在不太和谐。
I like painting。my dream is to become a painter.这是两个句子，口语听不出来，书面就错了。

照词性看没什么问题

第一行：Liu Yu Kun--Liu Yukun, and--but 表示转折用but。
第三行，who is lovely可改为，he is very lovely.

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