请以“shoping online”为题写一篇英语短文急 急 急 急就这些分都给你们了

请以“shoping online”为题写一篇英语短文急 急 急 急就这些分都给你们了
请以“shoping online”为题写一篇英语短文
急 急 急 急就这些分都给你们了

请以“shoping online”为题写一篇英语短文急 急 急 急就这些分都给你们了
Shopping online
Shopping online now days has developed into a newly fashion bazar in the society.It has lots of beneficiararies such as convinience,cheap but the same time good quality,easier to use and un-limited choosing choices.Shopping online had a big impact on our world and is still improving on it's quality.
Convinience is probably the main reason people use online shopping,with it they only have to turn on their computer and go online then start shopping.As for shopping on streets,they have to go outside,drive,arrive,walk for a long time to look for something they're satisfied with.But if online,they can just type in particular requirement for their purchasing and pop there goes their answers.They can take their time online looking for what they want instead of hurrying in the shops prepare for it's closing time.They can type in their address for the companies to deliver the goods door-to-door instead of them carrying bags of goods purchased from shops all the way home,and if not satisfied with the goods they can request the companies to exchange or refund in home while in real streets they have to go to the shop by themself and ask or refund.All of these,are some of the greatest reason why people love shopping online more than on streets and companies are happier to open shops online instead of on streets.
Lots of people say that goods are often better and cheaper online than on streets shops,and it is indead.No one likes to buy something same for different prices,this is probably why many people like shopping online instead of on streets.Also that if you go to a particular shop,there are limited choices for you to choose while online you can look up in different shops at the same time to compare the prices and quality.This is way more convinient and easier than street shops.
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