英语作文Why most kids like fast food?120字1.如今,大多数孩子喜欢吃快餐,麦当劳,肯德基等快餐店数量众多2.孩子们喜欢快餐的原因和你的建议

英语作文Why most kids like fast food?120字1.如今,大多数孩子喜欢吃快餐,麦当劳,肯德基等快餐店数量众多2.孩子们喜欢快餐的原因和你的建议
英语作文Why most kids like fast food?120字
1.如今,大多数孩子喜欢吃快餐,麦当劳,肯德基等快餐店数量众多
2.孩子们喜欢快餐的原因和你的建议

英语作文Why most kids like fast food?120字1.如今,大多数孩子喜欢吃快餐,麦当劳,肯德基等快餐店数量众多2.孩子们喜欢快餐的原因和你的建议
Nowadays,with the boom of fast food restaurants,most children are fond of fast food such as Mcdonald's and KFC,which own the lion's share of the Chinese market.There is no doubt saying the fact that fast food is to children's taste,which is one of the reasons why children like eating,at the same time,fast food is very convenient for children who want to have a quick meal to go to school or appease their hunger.
However,the disadvantage of eating fast food can't be put aside that fast food increasingly becomes the potential factor threatening children's health.Besides,it is eating fast food,to a certain extent,that contributes to the problem of obesity in terms of children.
Therefore,I highly recommend that children should eat less fast food with high calorie .In order to absorb rich nutriamtion such as vitins,eating many vegetables and much fruit is essential as well.Only when children have a balanced and healthy diet,can they keep fit!
大意：
如今,随着快餐店的兴起,大多数的孩子都喜欢吃快餐,比如光顾麦当劳和肯德基,这些都是在中国市场上占有重大份额的快餐店.毫无疑问的事实便是快餐符合孩子们的口味,这是他们喜欢吃快餐的一个重要原因,同时,对于那些急着赶着上学或填报肚子的孩子来说,快餐是十分便利的.
但是,吃快餐的坏处也是不容忽视的,快餐正日益成为威胁孩子们健康的潜在因素,除此之外,在一定程度属,吃快餐将导致肥胖问题.
因此,我强烈建议孩子们应该少吃这些带有高热量的快餐.为了吸收如维他命这类的营养,吃大量的蔬菜水果也是必要的.只有有了一个均衡健康的饮食,才会有健康的身体.
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Nowadays, western fast-food, such as McDonald’s and KFC, seems more delicious than traditional Chinese food, a certain number of children they cannot resist its fantastic taste, which attract millions...

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Nowadays, western fast-food, such as McDonald’s and KFC, seems more delicious than traditional Chinese food, a certain number of children they cannot resist its fantastic taste, which attract millions of fast-food restaurant coming to Chinese market. Besides, fast-food could emancipate mothers from the kitchen to a great extent, sometimes their parents
would rather take them to eat fast-food than eat at home.

However, fast-food itself has many side-effects. For example, it is a potential factor causing children's obesity which has been regarded as a sign of unhealthy generally; because of its lack of multi-nutritional protein or vitamin which can obtain relatively from meat and vegetable, they might suffer from various illnesses quite possibly due to the fact that their body has already function abnormally. In addition, XXX, a famous American biologist, did several researches proving that these Americans who have a preference on fast-food are weaker than who are not.

Much as it provides a great convenience in our daily life, it also contains plenty of irreversible disadvantages. In my opinion, the less fast-food the better; i.e., giving up fast-food is a wise
choice in your life.
如果这个用在托福/GRE等地方，效果会好很多。
他写的有些地方很主观，这个犯了一些上述考试中的逻辑错误。
good luck

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