【英语】帮我看看这段英文有没有毛病.My favorite sport is play badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English.I also like to surf the net.I can draw

【英语】帮我看看这段英文有没有毛病.My favorite sport is play badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English.I also like to surf the net.I can draw
【英语】帮我看看这段英文有没有毛病.
My favorite sport is play badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English.I also like to surf the net.I can draw and sing.I always walk to school.What about you?You wanna be my friend?

【英语】帮我看看这段英文有没有毛病.My favorite sport is play badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English.I also like to surf the net.I can draw
My favorite sport 【is play】（be动词后加doing 应该改成 is playing） badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English.I also like to surf the 【net】（上网应该是surf the Internet 我学的是这样的）.I can draw and sing.I always walk to school.What about you?DO（加上do助动词 因为后面有want,是动词,问句疑问代词do提前） you 【wanna】（wanna只是网上want to的谐音,不能用于英语作文,改成want to吧~） be my friend?
lz我很辛苦的求采纳0 0!

第一句，应该是playing badminton或者 to play badminton.
其他的没有错

My favorite sport is playing badminton. I play badminton for three tiams a week. I like eating ice cream.chocolates and cherries. I like reading and studying English. I also like surfing in the internet.I can draw and sing. I always walk to school. What about you? You want to be my friend?

改动的如下：
My favorite sport is playing badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English. I also like to surf the n...

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改动的如下：
My favorite sport is playing badminton.I play badminton about three times a week.I like to eat ice cream,chocolates and cherries .I like to read and study English. I also like to surf the net.I can draw and sing.I always walk to school.What about you?Do you wanna be my friend?
建议你呢，把like to do sth改为like doing sth.【估计你是想凑字数】虽然说这两种用法没什么区别，但是like to do sth主要是形容某一特定时刻的喜好，就是某一天突然喜欢了做什么事。
话说你写的是关于什么的英语作文，凑字数可以用其他方法=w=

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play应为playing,
to eat应为eating,
本文中like to do 改为like doing
i can draw and sing well.
最后一句:Do you wanna be my friend?