请英语好的同志帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my h

请英语好的同志帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my h
请英语好的同志帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my homework.On weekends,I ofen went swimming with my mom.I played badminton with my dad once a week.In July, my friends and I went to the movie therter to watch . We think it was very funny and exciting. In short,I think I had a great and relaxing summer vacation.

请英语好的同志帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my h
come to an end比较好
i often,不是 i ofen
挺好的,注意细节

The summer vacation has come to an end. We started school yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I surfed the internet and did my homework most of the time.On weeke...

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The summer vacation has come to an end. We started school yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I surfed the internet and did my homework most of the time.On weekends,I ofen went swimming with my mom.I played badminton with my dad once a week.In July, my friends and I went to the movie theater (拼写)to watch . We think it is very funny and exciting. In short,I think I had a great and relaxing summer vacation.

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不是has come 而是 has came现在完成时态，
therter 单词错了，often也错了，注意大小写

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The summer vacation was end. New term started yesterday, but I am still missing my summer vacation.In the summer vacation, I surfed the internet very ofen and finished my homework. On the week...

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The summer vacation was end. New term started yesterday, but I am still missing my summer vacation.In the summer vacation, I surfed the internet very ofen and finished my homework. On the weekends, I usually went swimming with my mom. I played badminton with my dad once a week. In July, my friends and me went to the movie theater and watched Ice Age 3. We think it was very interesting and exciting. In brief,I think I spended a great and leisure summer vacation.

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