作业帮雅思A类大作文中,用什么词来替换first、second、third这样的词?
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雅思A类大作文中,用什么词来替换first、second、third这样的词?
雅思A类大作文中,用什么词来替换first、second、third这样的词?
雅思A类大作文中,用什么词来替换first、second、third这样的词?
initially,first of all,firstly,等替换first
secondly,after that,then,beside等替换second
finally,thirdly,lastly,at last,moreover等替换third
这种替换的词介意你看慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作的书.词汇很多.但是千万不要模仿模板.
to begin with ,secondly,last but not least
其实这些词你完全可以用，不换，你可以用这几个词得7分以上，也可以用这几个词得5分以下，这样的词有即可，换它不是得分点。
雅思大作文结尾的高分模板的思路即将回顾全文部分省略，直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子：
It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But ...
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雅思大作文结尾的高分模板的思路即将回顾全文部分省略，直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子：
It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.
关于人才流失的话题，作者在结尾一上来就表达了自己的立场，即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改变这个状况做了期待。我们来对比另外一个例子：
All in all， the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. Nations need to work together on long-term projects， sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.
在分析解决型题材的结尾中我们也可以采用这种2要素的结尾方式，如果最后所剩时间不是很充分的前提下，省略对全文的回顾而直接表达观点也是一种明智的决定。
To conclude， it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased， they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others， particularly the family， above financial ambition or promotion.
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