英语短文改错 共有十处Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little c

英语短文改错 共有十处Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little c
英语短文改错 共有十处
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child strugging in the distance while many people were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managedto reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I wish everyone can give a hand when someone elseis in need.

英语短文改错 共有十处Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little c
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually (改为usual).At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while (改为when) suddenly I hear (改为heard) someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking (改为shocked) to find a little child strugging in the distance while many people were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had (去掉had) pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but (改为and) jumped into the water quickly.I managedto reach him and carried him back to (加上the)safety.To his (改为my) great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud (加上of) what I had done.I wish (改为hope) everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.保证答案的正确性.

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usual. It was around noon, when I was enjoying my reading near a lake. Suddenly I heared someone crying for help, I stood up to see...

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Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usual. It was around noon, when I was enjoying my reading near a lake. Suddenly I heared someone crying for help, I stood up to see what was happening. I was shocked in finding a little child strugging in the distances. Many people were standing by, but they didn't do anything. Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, and jumped into the water.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. It was a great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud of what I had done. I wish everyone would give a hand, when someone else is in need.

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