英语改错 10处错误My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own.He used to say,“My life will be better when I get a nicer car.”It took him more than three years to make his dreams come tru

英语改错 10处错误My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own.He used to say,“My life will be better when I get a nicer car.”It took him more than three years to make his dreams come tru
英语改错 10处错误
My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own.He used to say,“My life will be better when I get a nicer car.”It took him more than three years to make his dreams come true.However,Jack was not satisfied with what he has achieved.He worked even harder,hoped that he would able to buy a big house with a beautiful garden .One day,I told himself that happiness is a journey,not a destination.Try to do what you like and enjoy what you can enjoy at the present,and you will feel regretful when you are too old to do anything.

英语改错 10处错误My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own.He used to say,“My life will be better when I get a nicer car.”It took him more than three years to make his dreams come tru
第一行：去掉who（不然没有主句） hardly--hard（hardly是副词,意思是几乎不,hard也是副词,是努力地）
第二行：nicer--nice（没有比较）
第四行：has--had（前后时态一致） would able--would be able（没有动词） hoped--hoping（现在分词作状语）
第五行：himself--him（主语和宾语不一致,不能用self） is--was（时态一致）
第六行：去掉the（固定搭配at present,意思是现在）
第六行：will feel--will not feel（根据句意是不会后悔）

1 who was always 去掉who
2 hardly 改为hard
3 to make his dreams come true中make改为made，dreams come改为dream comes
4 has改为had
5 even harder改为more hard
6 hoped改为hoping
7 would后面加be

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1 who was always 去掉who
2 hardly 改为hard
3 to make his dreams come true中make改为made，dreams come改为dream comes
4 has改为had
5 even harder改为more hard
6 hoped改为hoping
7 would后面加be
8 himself改为him
9 at the present去掉the或者present改为moment
10and改为or或者will后面加个not
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1. earn enough money
2. when--since
3. nicer--nice
4. dreams--dream
5. hoped--hoping
6. himself--him
7.
8. enjoy--do
9. at the present-- at present
10.regretful--regret

jack told him that yt took sometime for the tablets to work的意思